Sunday, August 26, 2012

The Flutter

Drenched in her love, he sought no respite
Her hair danced on him, in the dim light
Enslaved by her eyes, he held her in his arms
Thought he'd resist, but gave in to her charms

Little did his smile say, little did her eyes
So close they lay, hearts spoke in sighs
Tears hung in her eyes, but she hid it in her smiles
Waiting to smell his breath,quietly she shies

Curled in his arms, she felt safe as a shell
Their breaths met, God had cast his spell
Hunted by his eyes, becharmed by his touch
Arrested for life she felt, his magic was such

Love rained that noon, her lips romanced the flutter
Draped herself in him, she sought him forever


- Deepak Karamungikar

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Lovely. :)

I have not seen you rhyme often. There's a rhythm to the rhyme that makes it appear simpler than it is. One has to ignore the rhymes and the words and patterns to get the depth of feeling expressed.

A very quotable poem. Kudos!

Jitu

Vjta said...

Beautiful !